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"The Bones of Paradise" by Jonis Agee

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Jonis Agee packs several types of books into her 2016 novel, The Bones of Paradise. She combines a fairly violent, rough-and-tumble American Frontier piece with a murder mystery, a very subtle romance, and a saga that captures the flow and change of  American history at an epochal moment as it affects the lives of its citizen-actors. The whole is an outstanding effort, succeeding at nearly all genres and historical epochs.

At the novel’s outset, J. B. Bennett has made a monentous decision and is in a grim, pensive mood as he rides from his ranch to his father’s adjoining spread. Something his estranged wife, Dulcinea, has written has convinced him to try to get closure on a grievous wrong he did her years ago. He pauses in his way when he discovers a young Lakota woman dead and half buried on his land. He dismounts to investigate and is shot and killed by a nearby mystery man with a rifle.

All the principal characters take it upon themselves to establish who did the deed; the one thing they all agree on is that the dentist-undertaker the town has elected sheriff is not equal to the task. And the principal characters are perhaps the main asset of this novel. They include Drum, J. B.’s choleric, embittered, thoroughly unsocial father, who has a past littered with dead bodies. The main protagonist is Dulcinea, who has returned to her (now dead) husband’s ranch with an olive leaf of sorts, to find that it’s a matter of days too late. There are Dulcinea’s two brutish, near-adult sons, who  promise no good, and Rose, a Lakota woman whose sister was the original murder victim.

But even the highly vivid and diverting cast of characters takes a back seat to Agee’s style. Simple, direct to the point of laconicism, it reflects the time and place and characters perfectly. The Sand Hills of Nebraska in 1900 are not the place for  sophisticated speech. The dialogue and indeed, the expository passages, fit perfectly into the social and cultural milieu. People hard-pressed to wring a living out of bad ground, bad weather, and a murderous government (refer to the 1890 massacre at Wounded Knee), stick doggedly to the issues at hand. You can always tell where you stand with this cast of characters.

The plotting of this story isn’t as accomplished. Events fit, at least, but I don’t think I’d be alone in my lingering befuddlement over the murders of Star, the Lakota woman, and J. B. (I suspect this is because I’ve always been slow on the uptake of key clues in mysteries, even after all is revealed.) Particularly frightening characters turn out to be innocent, at least of the main crime, but we learn this only after one such character has met a sudden and untimely end himself. Another, whom we are led to suspect though most of the book, has a series of nefarious acts attributed to him, but even when we get partial enlightenment on his motivation, I for one had a hard time accepting it.

On balance I’m recommending this book. It’s a vivid tome, full of human striving and moments of success in the sea of failure, and realistic depictions of Frontier culture and prejudices. The retrospective narrative of the massacre at Wounded Knee, carried on at different times in the book in the points of view of different characters, is exceptional, and in itself constitutes a principal reason to read the novel. Another grand reward: the technical mastery displayed by this ambitious author as she weaves together her multiple motifs, or genres, which all contribute to the highly accomplished whole. They work very nearly seamlessly together, and give the reader a very memorable ride.

 


 


 

"Heal." Poems by Hana Kopernik

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In a touching attempt to help others, poet and artist Hana Kopernik has published Heal, a collection of personal, understanding, and understated, poems. In an email she said, “I felt a strong need to share my journey of healing, for I know how much it could help someone else going through something similar.”

While her poems are never specific about what she went through and recovered from, they do offer an eloquent and highly personal guide to self-acceptance and self-love, a kind of pep talk for those hurting and feeling alone. Consider: “I am uncovering the dust sheets / thrown over the chambers of my heart / I don’t have to wait until the dawn anymore, / I am not afraid anymore / I am ready to collapse into the light / The power of the unknown within is waking up / like an embryo, a second breath / and I breathe in, with a yearning for / this life to be fully lived”

Additionally, certain short poems have an aphoristic feel, in which familiar sayings are given new weight with a change in the lyric: “Is your glass half full / or does every sip of it taste like / the very last?”
 
If it feels like the diction in individual pieces never quite leaves the mundane realm, the overall collection nevertheless achieves a gravitas with its sacred intent to reach out and try to make life easier for someone, anyone, in need. The extension of the poet’s hand and heart to other sufferers comes with an admonition contained in a mantra: “I let go / of the pressure / to have everything / under control / for the sake / of my soul’s / freedom” This short statement concludes with the catchphrase (or maybe it’s the title?), “ - repeat after me.”

This year, I have read more than one poetry collection by an (apparently) young practitioner, but this one is different, better. Kopernik has turned her experiences into a positive, in that she wants to help others because she knows what it is to suffer. Such altruism should be honored. Heal distinguishes its author; it displays the goodness of this artist’s soul. Let it be a help to yours.